You

You are the sun
that brightens up my day
Sending warmth and comfort
That will continue to stay
Giving me hope
that there is still tomorrow
And happiness too
like there's no sorrow

You are the stars in the sky
guiding my path
Also the moon
that shines in the night
Showing me direction
with the fullness it brings
Shaping out perfection
The best of everything

A candle in the dark
that light up my life
It's firmness may melt
And it's flame may die out
But I cannot deny
The strength it once gave
To overcome failure
to fight fear and be brave

A knight in shining armour
noble and wise
Worthy of admiration
naughty but nice?
Armed with a brilliant personality
What more could I ask for
You always save the day
You're someone I cannot ignore

You are like the wind
strong and yet gentle
Which I cannot see
Though I know its just right there
Needed or not
I cannot even touch
But I can always feel it
You are the air that I breathe

You are like a diamond
sweet, tough,  and tender
Precious and lovable
One that will last forever

You are my lucky charm
You're lucky to me
Everything went fine
since you became mine

You are my angel
A messenger of God
Working in silence
with such a big heart
You lend me your wings
And taught me how to fly
You're my protector and saviour
You're the apple of my eye

You are incomparable
and truly unique
You are different from them
You are the love that I need


~Chrisna Vergara

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/8/2017 2:17:00 PM
It was really a nice poem, I enjoyed reading it however I m new on this site and recently posted my 3 poems on this site and I wanted you to read them and give your comments on them
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Chrisna Vergara
Date: 5/20/2017 1:48:00 PM
Thank you :)
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