You

You
are beautiful.
like the moon.
cracked and cratered.

You
life meteors.
bombard.

You
do not pull away.
from the earth.
enlightened and light.


-maria
11.8.15
*remembering typhoon haiyan victims and survivors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 8:08 PM
Hija, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. LOVE LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Lovely finding this on your poem list today!
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 9:01 PM
well done......Love SKAT
Juman Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Hija --Wonderful write you take me away--Excellent 7+++ -----DO look me up let me know what you think
De La Luna Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:50 AM
Thank you, Zaladin, for the appreciation! Will visit your page
Nunez Avatar
November 8, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Hello, my crazy beautiful friend. Lovely to see this new post and I get to comment first! I like the style of your tribute. Short and simple but oh so sweet and heartwarming. Will be reading more...hugs!
De La Luna Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 6:52 AM
Hi! My crazy lovely Kim! Missed poetry soup and your visit to my page so I started posting again ahahah. So glad you like this piece! Warm hugs back!
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