Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

You

You came upon a sunny day
When things looked up 
and came our way
You shared with me 
The best of times
And from one chalice
We drank the wine 
But when the rain 
began to fall
And problems looked
a bit to tall
You found the will to have to go
But not the strength to let me know
I possess, no ill will
Because my dear 
I love you still

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Funom Makama February 6, 2015 at 8:07 AM Its nice having soupers like you here. This is just wow and I am beating myself to not reading this earlier. I am happy and amazed at what I am reading today and this piece over here contributes to my state. No doubt a 7!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2015 at 7:40 AM - Beautiful and touching written, Jerry - I wish you a lovely weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith January 24, 2015 at 3:50 AM Sometimes we just need to move on...real friends won't leave you in times of need Jerry T Curtis January 24, 2015 at 5:39 AM Thanks Tim that's what I do best

Toquyen Harrell January 23, 2015 at 10:10 PM Where did we go? haha. Are you sure you can make us stay away lol :) Jerry T Curtis January 24, 2015 at 5:38 AM Oh, Now you come back. lol

Jan Allison January 23, 2015 at 7:50 PM Posted a collaboration poem on the same theme Jerry its called 'fairweather friends' a 7 from me:-) hugs Jan xx Jerry T Curtis January 23, 2015 at 9:02 PM I read you poem, you get a 10 for sure