You

I'm fading into oblivion; I am slowly disappearing under the shadow of who has no comparison. I am but a speck in the grandness before me. My love; you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Very well crafted..good luck in the contest..Tim
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June 1, 2014 at 9:40 AM
Thank you very much Tim, I appreciate the read and comment.
Smith Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 2:34 PM
So beautiful!!... So much conveyed in so few words... A fan... Arlene...KHYU
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May 30, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Thank you very much Arlene, I appreciate it. :)
Halliday Avatar
May 30, 2014 at 1:56 PM
Nice sentimental Nonet. Well done. Thanks for commenting on mine.
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May 30, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Thanks Mark. This is the first time I have ever tried one of these type of poems. And I see many other types here I haven't tried or been aware of...Great site.
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