You

You. With hair like smoke, Sighs like foggy mornings. You, With eyes like oceans.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 11, 2013 at 8:29 PM
wow, Rollo, your haiku are on fire... glad the ocean is always near,,, it comes in handy... enjoyable haiku...LINDA
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February 11, 2013 at 5:48 PM
it goes along with my monoku!! Such imagery. Well, goodnight. you are my last comment . I was here two hours!! luv, Andrea
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February 11, 2013 at 5:42 PM
You beatify the essence of poetry my friend! I truly loved reading this romantic poem this evening! What a dynamic piece, Great Work!!
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