You

You are what keeps me thinking at night. You are what drives my curiosity crazy. You are on my mind at the most random times. You are the reason why I carry a smile on my face. If you must let me down, please let me down easy.

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2012 3:10:00 AM

Very well written Emily - like your poem, well done. - Welcome to P-Soup! - oxox Anne-Lise

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/21/2012 6:18:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Emily. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Prince Ekpemandu

Date: 5/21/2012 5:34:00 AM

Cool stuff..nice lines

Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/21/2012 2:55:00 AM

Oh, how lovely, but I hope you aren't ever let down!!!