You

You...

You....who are giving me hard time  pretending I don't exist,
You....are the one I wish hold my hand,
You... that knows what I feel,and keep quiet so long,
You...that makes me wonder why,
You...who makes me cry long into night,
You...are the one I wish to kiss and die,
You... are the one,
You...are just a dream,and nothing else,

lovememei do not know?

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Anne-Lise Andresen

October 14, 2012 at 1:21 PM

Dreams are important to have Ismeta - good for the mind and soul. - Like this poem very well. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

June 11, 2012 at 5:57 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Ivy Vresk

June 11, 2012 at 8:05 AM

Thank you dear Funom,for stooping by at this gorges Monday morning,Ivy

Dan Kearley

May 23, 2012 at 2:03 PM

You...I know you exist! You...That I wish could hold my hand.. You...That I wish I could talk to.. You...That I wish I could explain to.. You...Whose tears I wish I could dry.. You...I wish I could kiss,and never die.. You... Must be the one... You...Are in my dreams,and nowhere else.. I hope this brings you a smile :o)

Dan Kearley

May 23, 2012 at 11:54 PM

:o)

Ivy Vresk

May 23, 2012 at 9:37 PM

you know your comment just made my day,thank you dear Dan,one love,Ivy

Ivy Vresk

May 23, 2012 at 9:35 PM

omg,yes Dan you did made me smile,thank you so vey much,I love your respond,it is so :) ..... I am speechless,thank you,Ivy