You

You... You....who are giving me hard time pretending I don't exist, You....are the one I wish hold my hand, You... that knows what I feel,and keep quiet so long, You...that makes me wonder why, You...who makes me cry long into night, You...are the one I wish to kiss and die, You... are the one, You...are just a dream,and nothing else,

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/14/2012 1:21:00 PM

Dreams are important to have Ismeta - good for the mind and soul. - Like this poem very well. - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama

Date: 6/11/2012 5:57:00 AM

This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

Ivy Vresk
Date: 6/11/2012 8:05:00 AM

Thank you dear Funom,for stooping by at this gorges Monday morning,Ivy

Dan Kearley

Date: 5/23/2012 2:03:00 PM

You...I know you exist! You...That I wish could hold my hand.. You...That I wish I could talk to.. You...That I wish I could explain to.. You...Whose tears I wish I could dry.. You...I wish I could kiss,and never die.. You... Must be the one... You...Are in my dreams,and nowhere else.. I hope this brings you a smile :o)

Dan Kearley
Date: 5/23/2012 11:54:00 PM

:o)

Ivy Vresk
Date: 5/23/2012 9:37:00 PM

you know your comment just made my day,thank you dear Dan,one love,Ivy

Ivy Vresk
Date: 5/23/2012 9:35:00 PM

omg,yes Dan you did made me smile,thank you so vey much,I love your respond,it is so :) ..... I am speechless,thank you,Ivy

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 12:08:00 PM

very deep expressions. Love is a complicated thing, yet simple isn't it? Hope your day goes well. God Bless, Cindy Lu

Cindy Lu

Date: 5/15/2012 12:08:00 PM

very deep expressions. Love is a complicated thing, yet simple isn't it? Hope your day goes well. God Bless, Cindy Lu

Ivy Vresk
Date: 5/15/2012 12:19:00 PM

when your invisible love complicated,thank you for stopping by,I appreciate your time,Ivy stay inspired