You

When I found you I could hear the river running in the distance, as the water crashed over the rocks. When I found you I could smell the aftermath of rain hanging in the air. When I found you I could see the trees, greenery, rocks and river as they intertwine around me. When I found you I could nearly taste your kiss upon my lips as if it had never happened before. When I found you I could feel the breeze around me and the warmth as it grew inside me. When I found you...
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Hanna Barany Avatar
August 26, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Hi Rachel, thanks for your nice comment on my poem. I truly love this poem YOU, weird I have a poem titled YOU quite different. I would love your opinion when I put it on the site....don't think it can top yours though. Lynn Barany
Brown Avatar
August 23, 2011 at 7:26 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Rachel. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
Francis Avatar
August 22, 2011 at 8:03 PM
lovely.
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