You

You 

You’re the sun in my sky
You’re the star I see on high
You’re the warmth in the wind
You’re the lightness that comes within

You’re the flower that shows it bloom
You’re the birds that sing their tune
You’re the butterfly of beautiful color
You’re the hummingbird with wings of flutter

You’re the spirit of a fawn
You’re the galaxy from beyond
You’re cleansing like the rain
You’re the horse that can’t be tamed

You’re the echo of the hills
You’re the heart that can only feel
You’re the day and the night
You’re the darkness and the light

You’re beyond all common thought
You’re the prize that can’t be bought
You’re everything that there is to me
You’re the beauty in all I see

You are …
You

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/17/2011 7:41:00 PM
Great Job Jeff Congratulations on making the feature page.
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Date: 6/13/2011 4:14:00 PM
I love this poem so much.... My exact feeling about the source of all things... Bravo....
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Date: 6/13/2011 2:09:00 PM
your work is very passionate, i really enjoyed reading it jeff
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Date: 6/13/2011 1:39:00 PM
Very lovely and touching
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Date: 6/13/2011 12:25:00 PM
Hi Jeff -You are the poet whose heart we see.Thank you for sharing it with us through these beautiful sentiments,a lovely verse.Congratulations on making the feature page.I would also appreciate these love inspired words to be added to my favourites. Love Sylvia-known to poet friends as JUNE.
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Date: 6/13/2011 10:10:00 AM
My congratulaions on your poem being featured this week, Jeff
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Date: 6/13/2011 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Jeff. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:19:00 PM
really liked this one Jeff, very creative, well written. thank you for commenting Heavens Delight.
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Date: 6/11/2011 3:36:00 PM
Very rhythm and flowing expressions with rhyme, Jeff
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