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You.

You make me want to leap into nothing but air, The way you catch my breath, the way you play with my hair, Makes me want to scream, and makes me want to shout, Forgiveing and never forgetting when in dought, Youre touch is so soft, Mild but slow, This loving feeling ill never let go. Youre voice trembles slowly through the beat of my heart, Always and forever, never apart. Ill never look into anyone else's eyes but only You, Oh the wounderful things you do. Youre eyes capture me and send me to a far away land, When i look at you and take youre hand. Everything moves out of place, I forget my worry's and saddened face, For my pain is gone now, and You are to blame, For nothing other then taking away my shame. Youre heart makes me weakened, and makes me want to fly, From the moon to the golden stars that light the moonlight sky. Youre heart is pure, and soulfelt sweet, Forever its you, That i will keep. You make me smile endless and forgetful nights, You make me never want to love again, Because you are my mr right. (:

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/19/2010 7:11:00 PM
You realy want me to write you a Poem?
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Date: 9/13/2010 8:57:00 PM
Freaking cool and touchy, seriously, i can write different varieties, but not this way, as a lyric and as a lined poem flows with same point, doesn't lose people while reading... Much enjoyed! Take care now! And thx for commenting my poem before... ;)
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Date: 8/29/2010 2:34:00 PM
Very sensuous.
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:02:00 AM
A touching beautiful write from a talented poet as yourself....love Michael
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Date: 8/17/2010 11:48:00 AM
A very enjoyable read Miranda. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:29:00 PM
Heart felt words, Miranda. Lovely to see such love in the world. Gareth
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:28:00 PM
I like this one, Nice write :b
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