You.

You make me want to leap into nothing but air, 
The way you catch my breath, the way you play with my hair,
Makes me want to scream, and makes me want to shout,
Forgiveing and never forgetting when in dought,
Youre touch is so soft, Mild but slow, This loving feeling ill never let go.
Youre voice trembles slowly through the beat of my heart, Always and forever,
never apart. Ill never look into anyone else's eyes but only 
You, Oh the wounderful things you do.
Youre eyes capture me and send me to a  far away land, 
When i look at you and take youre hand. 
Everything moves out of place, I forget my worry's and saddened face,
For my pain is gone now, and You are to blame, For nothing other then taking away my 
shame. Youre heart makes me weakened, and makes me want to 
fly, From the moon to the golden stars that light the moonlight sky.
Youre heart is pure, and soulfelt sweet, Forever its you,
That i will keep. 
You make me smile endless and forgetful nights, You make me never want to love again,
Because you are my mr right. (:
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:11 PM
You realy want me to write you a Poem?
Ortiz Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Freaking cool and touchy, seriously, i can write different varieties, but not this way, as a lyric and as a lined poem flows with same point, doesn't lose people while reading... Much enjoyed! Take care now! And thx for commenting my poem before... ;)
Brown Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Very sensuous.
Falotico Avatar
August 22, 2010 at 6:02 AM
A touching beautiful write from a talented poet as yourself....love Michael
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2010 at 11:48 AM
A very enjoyable read Miranda. Love, Carol
James Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Heart felt words, Miranda. Lovely to see such love in the world. Gareth
Piecheta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 3:28 PM
I like this one, Nice write :b
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