You

you tore me to shreds
with idiot lies and rumours
try me again
one word is enough
i won't wait around you'll see
bad decision
one more time
i'm done for
but do you think you do me favours? 
do you think you mend me?
consider me before
you tear me 

r.thomas '10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 6, 2010 at 8:00 PM
strong words and very brave,, it's good when one realizes they won't eat more than they should,, awesome write..P.D.
Thomas Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:06 PM
thank you very much! i really appreciate it! i'm only 16, but i've been trying to get some poems 'out there' for quite a while now, and this seems like a really good place to do so.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:58 PM
This is so strong, and yet reeks with an undercurrent of the vulnerability you possess. Well written! -Laura
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