You

What if I said I didn't like you
But loved
I didnt think you were beautiful
but beyond and above
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 5, 2010 at 5:00 PM
Welcome to the Soup Family.. a most creative write.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 5, 2010 at 4:28 AM
greatly said,, a sweet write. I like the concept of this because when i read the first line i thought to myself "well how rude" lol, and the second line had me at awh:), enjoyed your write
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June 5, 2010 at 3:53 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Trevor. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2010 at 3:27 AM
Nice thoughts well penned
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