You

I was sitting on my desk
wondering what I should do
then I remembered that 
I should write a poem about you

Ever since I'd seen you
my mind has blanked out
except for the fact 
that all I can think of
is you without a doubt 

meeting you is what I desire
you have stolen away my heart 
and set my soul on fire
I don't care how you are 
I love you weather your dumb or smart.

What a feeling I had when I first saw you
You had set my dream sky blue
understand that I am no poet
but we will meet someday
and that's for sure because I know it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:16 AM
dear new friend such heartfelt emotions! I'm sure she will love it..3rd verse last line you want whether :) Light & Love
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May 11, 2010 at 5:37 PM
True love has no rules, and the heart always shadows the mind. Excellent write
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