You

You

You are the tranquility in my heart, my summers rain

You brought back hope and the warmth of love where desolation did reign

You looked inside my mind to find the real me

quite unlike others whom only see outwardly

You've never tried to change me, your always so gentle and kind

to not see the rare gem that is you, I'd surely have to be blind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ace Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 4:28 PM
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July 21, 2010 at 9:58 PM
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July 21, 2010 at 9:57 PM
Seraphim, these three poems I have read of yours are excellent! Why are you not writing more? you obviously have talent. I would love to see you post more work.
Wilmot Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Your words are simple at yet beautiful
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April 26, 2010 at 6:37 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Seraphim. If you would like to have more of your poetry read try to limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 25, 2010 at 7:24 AM
Great Rhyme or Couplet...Enjoyed the romantic write..Keep the creative pen flowing...Welcome to soup...I can tell that you are going to be an asset to the group..Looking forward to many more writes of yours and hope that you enjoy reading many here...Sara
Palli Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 12:02 PM
So sweet
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April 24, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Nicely written. A simple suggestion... I think "your always so gentle..." should read, "you're always...".
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