You

When I first saw you
I liked you- A LOT.
You were indeed my
only thought
that laid restless on 
my mind.
I couldn't blink an eye
too miss the second
of the sight of you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Good reflections
Trevino Avatar
February 23, 2010 at 2:09 PM
Very romantic I enjoyed reading your poem today..
Delacroix Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 6:19 PM
It called smitten, dear Brittany, and you've expressed well in this short poem. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.
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