You

you,
you hurt me
you devise me
you make me cry
you made me say goodbye
now that you are gone...
i can now say 
"so long"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 26, 2009 at 7:12 PM
Great poem Debbie! Welcome to the soup!! I look forward to reading more of your poetry, and thanks for the comments on my poem! ~Jen~
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November 25, 2009 at 5:31 PM
thanx for sharing.got a giggle out of that one.
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November 25, 2009 at 4:25 AM
Such fasinating writing I am reading today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and heart with us today Debbie. I wish you a weekend filled with love and inspiration. May your writings inspire others to write from their hearts as well. Love, Carol
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