YOU

Lost inside,
I need U as my own...
I wonder around,
Suddenly, my mind is blown...
My mother judges,
I know, she's wrong...
For YOU,
My heart beats strong...
I will push forward,
My "life" aches...
Without you, 
I'll no longer wake...
Without you,
My life will not forsake...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Mcconnell Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 4:19 AM
Interesting writing Angela, really liked your wording and flow with good rhyme too. Have a great day, blessings from Scotland,Gordon
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November 14, 2025 at 12:32 PM
Thank You
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