Larry Brown Poet Rhyme

YOU

I see you full of hope,so life filled,
But I , brocken,yet to be healed,
I see you, healthy,body built
But I , drying,body thinned,
I see you happy filled with laughter,
But I ,sad all but a disaster,
All hope draining, a drying flower.

[ ] I see you, filled with kindness,
But I , harsh like sun in wilderness,
I see you, a walk of confidence,
But I,a walk of silence,
I see you, a productive offspring,
But I, a disappointing one.

I see you all, carrying secrets,
Trying as much no one to detect,
But I,tired of pretence like it's all okay,
I see you all, putting on masks,
But beneath truth in the dark,
I see you,for you.

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Beata Agustin June 24, 2025 at 11:41 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.