You

You You opened my mind to a fantasy You walked in, unbothered, cigarette in hand You take a few puffs, put it out, light one again You leave it open, naked, unfinished You place your kisses on its forehead You give You take You rip my heart out You took me from a place of comfort You placed me in a train wreck You walked out, unbothered, cigarette in hand You take a few puffs, put it out and light one again You answer, you ghost, you take you darn time You feel, you surpress You engage You let go You left, unbothered, cigarette in hand You take a few puffs, put it out and light it again.....

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/30/2025 4:29:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.