You

You
You opened my mind to a fantasy
You walked in, unbothered, cigarette in hand
You take a few puffs, put it out, light one again
You leave it open, naked, unfinished
You place your kisses on its forehead
You give
You take
You rip my heart out
You took me from a place of comfort
You placed me in a train wreck
You walked out, unbothered, cigarette in hand
You take a few puffs, put it out and light one again
You answer, you ghost, you take you darn time
You feel, you surpress
You engage
You let go
You left, unbothered, cigarette in hand
You take a few puffs, put it out and light it again.....

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Beata Agustin

Date: 1/30/2025 4:29:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.