Kelli Egloff-Metzgar Poet Rhyme

You

As I sit alone
in the empty field
With only my dreams 
A mountain outstretches
it arms to hug me
Its lips, to gently kiss
my tearstained cheek
Birds hum sad, sad songs
Of loves lost in time
Bring forth all the memories
I've tried hard to push
from my mind
Beauty surrounds me
Encircles me in a loving
touch
But still, all I wish for
Is you
It is always the same
You here with me
You to end my pain.

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Just That Archaic Poet August 29, 2013 at 9:23 AM I really liked this piece; you have some beautiful verses throughout and it's full of emotion. Good job; kudos :)

John Rhinem November 22, 2011 at 1:59 PM Smile, Tis Very Beautiful My Dear * Rivers Amid The Depths of Ones Soul Are Always Beautiful to Behold * Also, Thank You, For Your Beauties Kind Visit * My Luv Always, John!:) *

Andrea Dietrich June 10, 2010 at 2:49 PM This is just wonderful, Kelli! I enjoyed it. LUv, andrea

Sajdah Al-Riyami June 18, 2009 at 12:42 AM The Mountain Imagery is quite out-standing,I find this One a Gold!You really Brought the Sadness on the table and What you are able:)

Misty Penton-Leccese June 17, 2009 at 8:36 PM Wonderfully written. Brought tears to my eyes for the fact that I've been in those shoes. Lots of love, Misty