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As I sit alone in the empty field With only my dreams A mountain outstretches it arms to hug me Its lips, to gently kiss my tearstained cheek Birds hum sad, sad songs Of loves lost in time Bring forth all the memories I've tried hard to push from my mind Beauty surrounds me Encircles me in a loving touch But still, all I wish for Is you It is always the same You here with me You to end my pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/29/2013 9:23:00 AM
I really liked this piece; you have some beautiful verses throughout and it's full of emotion. Good job; kudos :)
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Date: 11/22/2011 1:59:00 PM
Smile, Tis Very Beautiful My Dear * Rivers Amid The Depths of Ones Soul Are Always Beautiful to Behold * Also, Thank You, For Your Beauties Kind Visit * My Luv Always, John!:) *
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Date: 6/10/2010 2:49:00 PM
This is just wonderful, Kelli! I enjoyed it. LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/18/2009 12:42:00 AM
The Mountain Imagery is quite out-standing,I find this One a Gold!You really Brought the Sadness on the table and What you are able:)
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Date: 6/17/2009 8:36:00 PM
Wonderfully written. Brought tears to my eyes for the fact that I've been in those shoes. Lots of love, Misty
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