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i call your name aloud...this time... not carefully in lyric rhyme, but shrill and all too recklessly devoid of pretty poetry: “YOU!!!!” …but penned, as spoken words, from me are each the same: futility. (“…you….”)

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Date: 5/21/2009 8:59:00 PM
Your poem summarizes the failure to communicate that we experience too often. Love the way you get straight to the point! Nice write, Steve. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/21/2009 2:28:00 AM
I feel this poem to the heart, well put. love, Kristin
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