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YOU, the band-aid to my bleeding wound, the life buoy in my ocean, the answer to my prayers, my shelter from the storm the spark to my flame; You fuel my fire and passion! My muse? That's YOU. What else can I say? I'd rather be your willing captive --everlastingly yours-- than the freest bird there is! I wish to be at your mercy My magnificent force of light, YOU Submitted for... Podium Placing Promise(4) Poetry Contest (Winner: 2nd Place) Sponsored by Brian Strand Date: 01/03/2021 Double Nonet Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by William Kekaula Date written: 12/17/2020

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Date: 1/5/2021 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations to win. What a wonderful write. Someone is very lucky. Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings..............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/5/2021 5:41:00 PM
Thank you for the feedback and visit, Paula:-)
Date: 1/5/2021 3:42:00 AM
GREAT. Congratulations to win. HAPPY NEW YEAR
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/5/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Anisha:-) Happy New Year to you as well!
Date: 12/23/2020 3:24:00 AM
Ahhh!!! So romantic this winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/23/2020 4:03:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sara:-)
Date: 12/21/2020 6:40:00 PM
A fantastic piece! Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Edward, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/22/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for my placement, William:-) Aloha and happy holidays to you, my friend!
Date: 12/17/2020 2:28:00 PM
One breath; here, a lightening piece!! A fantastic write, Edward!!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/17/2020 2:53:00 PM
Thank you so much, Newt:-) I appreciate the visit!
Date: 12/17/2020 2:28:00 PM
Beautifully done in awesome metaphors--enjoyed the tone of this ode.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/17/2020 2:52:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Vijay:-) So glad you enjoyed it, my friend!

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