You

You are my sun in the day. You are my stars in the night. You are my blanket when i am cold. You are my breath when i breath. You are my everything!

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Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/12/2008 8:24:00 AM

This is an excellent list poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of YOU is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph

George Anos

Date: 10/12/2008 6:51:00 AM

So simple but eloquently soulful! an inspiring read! Brgds. George

Deneen White

Date: 10/11/2008 7:30:00 PM

love is grand when you have that special someone, great tribute, welcome to the soup, take care D-nyce

Fathima Dawood

Date: 10/11/2008 4:08:00 AM

I gather you are referig to God, well done. He is our everything - always there for us. Peace - and welcome to the soup!!!! Fathima