You

You are my sun in the day.
You are my stars in the night.
You are my blanket when i am cold.
You are my breath when i breath.
You are my everything!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Spence Sr Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 8:24 AM
This is an excellent list poem. I like how the title resonates throughout the poem, and how the essence of YOU is reinforced. Great job and welcome to Poetry Soup! ~Joseph
Anos Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 6:51 AM
So simple but eloquently soulful! an inspiring read! Brgds. George
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October 11, 2008 at 7:30 PM
love is grand when you have that special someone, great tribute, welcome to the soup, take care D-nyce
Dawood Avatar
October 11, 2008 at 4:08 AM
I gather you are referig to God, well done. He is our everything - always there for us. Peace - and welcome to the soup!!!! Fathima
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