Yosemite

Yosemite’s huge boulders Sliced in two in the Ice Age Half Dome and El Capitan Both carved by a sheet of ice, a glacier Peering down from the mountains Buttercups grace the valley Where deer come to graze at dusk Worlds of wonder wait at national parks *A Parise Pariku for Rick’s contest. Written June 21, 2012
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Dunn Avatar
January 10, 2014 at 4:30 PM
I return your comment ilove your view of nature here in this write, i have never seen a glacier before but i wrote about one or two of them in my time, you have a great earthy tone to your writes like a natureal down to earth feeling keep this natural wisdom to your stuff i loved your write here. cheri
Chircop Avatar
May 13, 2013 at 6:17 PM
Tnks for introducing me to Yosemite..You make it sound so beautiful.How are you sweet lady?Miss you and your poemsa great deal
Harper Avatar
April 27, 2013 at 7:29 PM
Excellent homage given to Yosemite, very lovely poem Carolyn
Loving Iii Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 1:26 PM
And yet we still live to one day see.
Austin Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Have always wanted to go to Yosemite. Your poem entices me. Love, daver
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
June 28, 2012 at 3:39 AM
Carolyn, Please Call. (Of course your poetry is wonderful I love it in Yosimite...camped there with the kids one year.) Love you. Dane Ann
Ishmael Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 12:44 PM
yosemite is a place i have to visit ,ever since i was a boy i wanted to go there ,hope to very soon in the future,but for now your poem take me there as i read it ,thank you ,carolyn
Sivey Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 2:54 PM
This is a fabulous write my friend! I've never been to Yosemite but I long to do so! Your poem has made it easier to make plans for that trip! I really enjoyed your pleasant write! Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 1:46 PM
Written words can say a lot...this is beautiful from the bottom to the top. - Love it Carolyn, take care. - Sending you love from me. :)
Grisetti Avatar
June 21, 2012 at 1:41 PM
This is sure to be w inner with Rick. Love to read your poems.
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