Yosemite

no litter in tents

    scuffle --- frost night long --- rustle

          mouse feasts  we listen
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Wolf Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 3:06 AM
Vividly depicted, Virginia. ~ Gershon
Waters Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 4:45 PM
never forgotten that long cold night - last of the season - so snow in the air. Foolish husband - rules never applied to him.
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Excellent haiku Virginia, so many seem to forget the syllable count and a natural theme, well done...
Waters Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 6:35 PM
thanks, totally agree. I keep honing the true form - there are myriad other forms to use. One should respect the haiku more.
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