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Yosemite

no litter in tents scuffle --- frost night long --- rustle mouse feasts we listen

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/5/2018 3:06:00 AM

Vividly depicted, Virginia. ~ Gershon

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/7/2018 4:45:00 PM

never forgotten that long cold night - last of the season - so snow in the air. Foolish husband - rules never applied to him.

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/2/2018 4:40:00 PM

Excellent haiku Virginia, so many seem to forget the syllable count and a natural theme, well done...

Virginia Waters
Date: 8/2/2018 6:35:00 PM

thanks, totally agree. I keep honing the true form - there are myriad other forms to use. One should respect the haiku more.