Yo.Doctor...

Snaps Dragon, to open the door
"What time is it" ? Said two short four
Got the crystal so I can see you duck
Decoding the names wasn't just my luck

... I'm Brilliant! she said...

As the lights flickered on
Stone angles moving angels
by a River's song
And saved to disc
Before she was gone...
His name on her breath
To prove she'd been found.

North of the pole, don't stand in the light
When the shadows cast two, the world isn't right
Earth was her name in a woman's form
"So time was moving backwards" but not any more.

Smart said Darth but you're not the same
"...it's Time my Lord, the time has come..."
Take the watch that's not been open
Name the face that's not yet spoken
Make the bond that's never broken

"Hello sweetheart" ... it's You, I reckon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/27/2010 12:25:00 PM
I find your poetry is enthralling and delightful, hope u keep writing ~Caleigh Hi ~Bob
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:49:00 AM
Izzy u have been VERY missed here.. without your great writes there is a gap in the Soup.. glad u have returned to thrill us all once again.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 2/25/2010 11:23:00 AM
IZZY where in the heck have you been? Glad to see your post today. Hope this means there will be more soon. Love,Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:36:00 AM
Great tale my friend... Keep the pen moving... Thank you for all of your kind comments on my work..... Excellent....:JP]
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Date: 2/25/2010 10:31:00 AM
Awesome rythm and rhyme Izzy, I like your rhymes. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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