Brian Anderson Poet Rhyme

Yin & Yang ( a Love Letter )

she's absolut
i'm hennessy
i'm rush hour traffic in L.A.
she's a small town in Tennessee
she's left handed
i think i'm always right
i love the way she will compromise
i never give in without a fight

hard/soft

she's satin sheets
i'm the body wrapped within
together were complete
without her i feel without a friend

i'm lust
she's desire
she's my redemption
my salvation from the fire
and while were not exactly opposites
she compliments me beautifully
picking me up when i fall
and standing by me dutifully

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Brian Strand April 30, 2009 at 8:22 AM A talented write Brian.Rgds Brian

Charlene Bird April 20, 2009 at 8:38 PM Nicely said, how great it is to have someone so special. This is definitely going into my favs dear Brian!

I Have Forgiven You But It Will Never Be The Same April 17, 2009 at 10:27 AM this is really my favorite poem of yours

Robin Maughan April 17, 2009 at 8:54 AM More WOWS!! great creation...poetry is the most UNDERREATED theraphy!! Hugs, Robin Maughan

Marvin Anderson April 16, 2009 at 8:43 PM Well done bro. I really do like this one. You are gonna make me work if you keep writing like this. Very proud. You got the glow, sho-nuff.

Julie Loveless April 16, 2009 at 6:01 PM amazing, just absolutly beautiful!

Autumn Rose Wood April 16, 2009 at 3:49 PM Love this! Like e.e.cummings your poetic use of small letters capitalizes the strength and intent of the words. Thanks

Charmaine Chircop April 16, 2009 at 2:52 PM wonderful -charma

Carolyn Devonshire April 16, 2009 at 2:01 PM You've got soup mail.

Carolyn Devonshire April 16, 2009 at 1:48 PM There is much truth in "opposites attract," Brian. People with whom you share nearly everything in common can be good friends. For me, I sense more chemistry with someone who is uniquely true to themselves, even if I disagree with their views. Sparks some great debate! Love the message in this poem, Brian!