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Yesterday's Rain

I feel there is a brighter tomorrow
If today I get past the pain
I will walk again in the sunshine
Remembering yesterday's rain
I will walk with determination
Because I have the world to gain
And my storms will be forgotten
Washed away by yesterday's rain
Now the fear has left my body
Faith and hope are all that remain
As I climb the mountain I'm given
Strengthened by yesterday's rain.

Copyright © Vince Suzadail Jr. | Year Posted 2008

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Rania Aissaoui Date: 11/12/2008 5:07:00 AM Wow! I really love it! Very well written I am totally adding it to my favorits, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poems with us. :) Login to Reply

Laura Mckenzie Date: 8/15/2008 10:59:00 AM Just wonderful keep climbing! Good insight in this write Laura :) Login to Reply

Alana Tye Date: 7/30/2008 12:46:00 AM I absolutely love the title of this poem! The inspiration that lies within gives one a sense of hope and the desire to keep pushing forward. One of my faves! Beautiful work :) -Alana Login to Reply

Sara Lokken Date: 7/22/2008 10:10:00 AM Very inspiration with an atomosphere of hope and determination. A beautiful piece, Sara:) And thanks for your kind words. Login to Reply

Oma Bennett Date: 7/17/2008 9:13:00 PM great write, Oma Login to Reply

Farah Chamma Date: 7/17/2008 1:45:00 PM :) That's a wonderful write...Stay potent with what you write...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah Login to Reply

Marycile Beer Date: 7/16/2008 6:16:00 PM You are truly above Par, Vince. I know the feelings. Today I have accepted two more reading sessions a week. This makes three. I have another deal I am working on so I will wait to mention it. God Bless, Cile Login to Reply

Josey Portas Date: 7/16/2008 3:51:00 PM I agree with this one, rain ending always has an effect on me, too. I like it. Josey Leigh Login to Reply

Helen J Radford Date: 7/13/2008 12:03:00 PM There is always sunshine after the rain! I love this piece as it is positive and full of hope! Thanks once again for the lovely ocmments you have left on my work. I'm so glad the soup is restored - I missed you all!! Helen Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 7/13/2008 12:47:00 AM There was a lot last week whilst we were on holiday..so your poem is a welcome tonic Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments Login to Reply

Angela Crabtree Date: 7/12/2008 8:52:00 PM Long time no hear from. I miss ya! This is most inspirational, and somewhat similar in feeling to one I wrote today. I love your rhyme poems, and this one is extra awesome! Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/10/2008 10:18:00 AM Vince, you are truly an inspiration today. Thank you for your outstanding and timely writing of this poem. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 7/9/2008 6:12:00 PM This is another of my favorites! It's a great reminder that if today seems dark, tomorrow can be even brighter if we are willing to have faith! Thank you for reminding us to look at the glass as half full, instead of half empty. God Bless....Carrie Login to Reply

Mary Duhart Date: 7/8/2008 6:30:00 PM Very uplifting. I like the rhythm and flow and the message this poem conveyes. Login to Reply

Jaime Ferreyros Date: 7/8/2008 4:24:00 PM another good poem...Again! Login to Reply

Charles Fuller Date: 7/7/2008 8:22:00 AM Well Vince this one just reaches out and touches the spirit. I love the optomisim and the inspiration that flow with every word. I am so glad to be back and reading and writing with you again. My best to you, Charlie Login to Reply

Michael Degenhardt Date: 7/7/2008 6:03:00 AM The flow is complimented by the rhyme scheme here and the imagery is clear and so well conveys the sentiment of the write. Very well written. Michael Login to Reply

Christy Hardy Date: 7/6/2008 5:51:00 PM I have been told, "If it doesn't kill you, it will make you stronger" I guess that is so. Great poem, wonderful message. Always, Christy Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 7/6/2008 5:14:00 PM So positive and filled with hope. I am deeply inspired. Beautiful write. Love, shar Login to Reply

Deneen White Date: 7/6/2008 3:11:00 PM Hi Vince I love this write, you give the reader hope and instill and renew faith great write, take care D-n yce Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 7/6/2008 3:01:00 PM hi Vince - this is a beautiful poem that lifts the spirit and enlightens the soul - great poem that totally inspires the reader - thanks for sharing Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 7/6/2008 2:37:00 PM Hi Vince You made my day with this inspiring write. Truly enjoyed hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Have a wonderful day. Thanks for sharing this with us! Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply

Heidie Buys Date: 7/6/2008 12:54:00 PM Oh my Vince, you have really touched me with this one. So very inspirational, uplifting and very well written. Well done. Regards Heidie. Login to Reply