Vince Suzadail Jr. Poet Rhyme

Yesterday's Rain

I feel there is a brighter tomorrow
If today I get past the pain
I will walk again in the sunshine
Remembering yesterday's rain
I will walk with determination
Because I have the world to gain
And my storms will be forgotten
Washed away by yesterday's rain
Now the fear has left my body
Faith and hope are all that remain
As I climb the mountain I'm given
Strengthened by yesterday's rain.

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Rania Aissaoui November 12, 2008 at 5:07 AM Wow! I really love it! Very well written I am totally adding it to my favorits, thank you so much for sharing your beautiful poems with us. :)

Laura Mckenzie August 15, 2008 at 10:59 AM Just wonderful keep climbing! Good insight in this write Laura :)

Alana Tye July 30, 2008 at 12:46 AM I absolutely love the title of this poem! The inspiration that lies within gives one a sense of hope and the desire to keep pushing forward. One of my faves! Beautiful work :) -Alana

Sara Lokken July 22, 2008 at 10:10 AM Very inspiration with an atomosphere of hope and determination. A beautiful piece, Sara:) And thanks for your kind words.

Oma Bennett July 17, 2008 at 9:13 PM great write, Oma

Farah Chamma July 17, 2008 at 1:45 PM :) That's a wonderful write...Stay potent with what you write...Thank you for sharing... TYOne, Farah

Marycile Beer July 16, 2008 at 6:16 PM You are truly above Par, Vince. I know the feelings. Today I have accepted two more reading sessions a week. This makes three. I have another deal I am working on so I will wait to mention it. God Bless, Cile

Josey Portas July 16, 2008 at 3:51 PM I agree with this one, rain ending always has an effect on me, too. I like it. Josey Leigh

Helen J Radford July 13, 2008 at 12:03 PM There is always sunshine after the rain! I love this piece as it is positive and full of hope! Thanks once again for the lovely ocmments you have left on my work. I'm so glad the soup is restored - I missed you all!! Helen

Brian Strand July 13, 2008 at 12:47 AM There was a lot last week whilst we were on holiday..so your poem is a welcome tonic Vince.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Angela Crabtree July 12, 2008 at 8:52 PM Long time no hear from. I miss ya! This is most inspirational, and somewhat similar in feeling to one I wrote today. I love your rhyme poems, and this one is extra awesome!

Carol Sunshine Brown July 10, 2008 at 10:18 AM Vince, you are truly an inspiration today. Thank you for your outstanding and timely writing of this poem. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards July 9, 2008 at 6:12 PM This is another of my favorites! It's a great reminder that if today seems dark, tomorrow can be even brighter if we are willing to have faith! Thank you for reminding us to look at the glass as half full, instead of half empty. God Bless....Carrie

Mary Duhart July 8, 2008 at 6:30 PM Very uplifting. I like the rhythm and flow and the message this poem conveyes.

Jaime Ferreyros July 8, 2008 at 4:24 PM another good poem...Again!

Charles Fuller July 7, 2008 at 8:22 AM Well Vince this one just reaches out and touches the spirit. I love the optomisim and the inspiration that flow with every word. I am so glad to be back and reading and writing with you again. My best to you, Charlie

Michael Degenhardt July 7, 2008 at 6:03 AM The flow is complimented by the rhyme scheme here and the imagery is clear and so well conveys the sentiment of the write. Very well written. Michael

Sharon Winter July 6, 2008 at 5:14 PM So positive and filled with hope. I am deeply inspired. Beautiful write. Love, shar

Deneen White July 6, 2008 at 3:11 PM Hi Vince I love this write, you give the reader hope and instill and renew faith great write, take care D-n yce

Michael Jordan July 6, 2008 at 3:01 PM hi Vince - this is a beautiful poem that lifts the spirit and enlightens the soul - great poem that totally inspires the reader - thanks for sharing

P Sheart July 6, 2008 at 2:37 PM Hi Vince You made my day with this inspiring write. Truly enjoyed hun. Many blessings to you and yours. Have a wonderful day. Thanks for sharing this with us! Love Light Truth Patricia

Heidie Buys July 6, 2008 at 12:54 PM Oh my Vince, you have really touched me with this one. So very inspirational, uplifting and very well written. Well done. Regards Heidie.