Yesterday's Music

Yesterday’s Music

The music of a burbling rill
Close by a dry stone wall,
And on the air, so calm and still
A blackbird's fluting call

Green finches in the rowan tree
Join in the meadow’s song,
And big fat yellow bumble bees
Hum merrily along

The flutter of a butterfly
 The flip of trout at play
The rustle of a mouse nearby
The sounds of yesterday...





Janette's sounds contest--18th April
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Congratulations on your HM in the contest with this beaut., Maggie! Enjoyed reading it, today...somehow, I missed it before...Audrey
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May 9, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Congrats Margaret on your HM in the Sounds Familiar contest ... with this beautiful expressive poem..enjoy your win and Happy Mother's Day...luv.. Linda-Marie.
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May 9, 2010 at 8:31 AM
Nice use of sounds imagery and rhyme to convey your thoughts. I like the lighthearted feel. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Janette's contest. Enjoy your success. Wishing you many more. Karen
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 9:39 PM
This is a wonderful entry Margaret. I hope it does well in the contest. I am putting this into my fav's. Love, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 2:50 AM
Cool, Margaret. I hope you place! ME LIKES.
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 11:02 PM
I enjoyed the well penned poem
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