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Yesterday's Joys

Yesterday's joys come flooding back, memories that stir the senses that leave me bereft for their lack. Yet still their joy punches a whack, that set a stir in my pulses. Yesterday's joys come flooding back. And so I gather up my sack, full to brim with loving senses that leave me bereft for their lack. Joyous feeling my heart do rack once more loving without lapses. Yesterday's joys come flooding back. No longer dressed in dark black, I, now leave behind all senses that leave me bereft for their lack. Stuffed full of joyful glimpses, my sack holds passionate senses. Yesterday's joys come flooding back that leave me bereft for their lack. written 11/02/2014 contest: pick a title I chose Yesterday's Joys

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Date: 11/15/2014 2:07:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on your win.
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:45:00 PM
I love the form you used and your content. Great poem.
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:00:00 PM
I've tried this form and failed miserably.. but your execution is smooth!! Congrats on your win !!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 11/15/2014 1:19:00 AM
ty Debra I love the form hugs
Date: 11/2/2014 11:13:00 PM
This is an excellent write Shadow. I hope this ranks high on the winners list of this challenge.
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:17:00 AM
ty Maurice much appreciated hugs
Date: 11/2/2014 1:45:00 PM
A very good Villanelle..They are not so easy to write but this one reads like a very gifted writer wrote it..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:47:00 PM
gosh Sara ty so much I love the form it is so rewarding when it works correctly hugs

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