Yesterday's Griefs Are Today's Joys- Lune

Yesterday's grief, today's joy 




through a gloomy night
twilight tears
turn to morning dew 




Kelly's lune- 5/3/5
Inspired by pic#1
Written August 2nd, 2015
For contest "Pretty little lunes" by Andrea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Merryman Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:02 PM
A positive message in lovely form! Congrats on your win, Upma! Love, Kim
Ward Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 12:41 AM
I like the phrase "twilight tears". Well done for your win, Upma. Jullia, xx
A   Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 8:44 PM
Hi Dr Upma, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
A  Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 1:39 AM
Dr Upma, congratulations in Andrea's "Pretty Little Lunes contest" SKAT Love
Mandani Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 9:31 AM
This is nice--real poetry!
Allison Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx
Nance Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Grats on your win, beautifully done!
Callus Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 5:43 AM
Lovely turn from night gloom to bright dawn; a positive outlook! ~ Congratulations on your lovely win, Upma! // paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 1:06 AM
Dr. Upma, you did a really nice one for my contest. Very pretty! Congratulations.
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Beautiful interpretation of the image - good luck in the contest:-)hugs Jan xx
Mandani Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 11:31 AM
This is good. Good luck.
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