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Yesterday's Flame The candle’s flame still dances with the breeze and casts her playful shadows on the wall that pique imaginations with a tease and bring back ancient memories that please, and yet her flame’s not bright as I recall. This once tall, slender beauty was quite chic, in evening's dimming light she graced the room while glowing with a certain soft mystique that always left emotions feeling weak, and filled my senses with her sweet perfume. The fervent flame that left a warming glow and captured my imagination’s dreams, still softly burns, though not as bright a glow that conjured ancient dreams I used to know, and yet she still emits her gentle beams. Today this candle doesn’t stand as tall; her fabled slender fading figure flees while beads of wax, like aging teardrops, fall; though not the tapered beauty I recall, her gentle flame still dances with the breeze. February 20, 2024

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Date: 4/7/2024 6:50:00 AM
This is such a lovely write many blessings.
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John Gondolf
Date: 4/7/2024 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Yolanda, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/29/2024 5:01:00 AM
Beautiful poetry John, the rhymes, the cadence, the theme. Superb
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/29/2024 8:19:00 AM
Thanks so much for the wonderful comment, Tommy, I'm glad you liked this one. Hope you have a wonderful Easter. John
Date: 3/19/2024 10:55:00 AM
Dear John, this is a beautifully written poem. It is such a captivating read with wonderful poetic lines full of imagery. The reader can so easily visualise the flickering of the candles’s flame and the memories it evokes even if the glow is not as bright as it once was. I love the smooth flow of the poem and its rhyme scheme. The line, ‘ white beads of wax, like aging teardrops, fall ‘ is outstanding. So symbolic. Loved reading this gentle poem that has captured so much. Blessings to you :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/22/2024 2:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Christina, I appreciate it. Hugs, John
Date: 3/15/2024 3:46:00 AM
Great poem, very well articulated!! And captures the imagination....
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/15/2024 4:24:00 AM
Glad I was able to capture your imagination, Cathy. I sent you a Soup Mail. John
Date: 3/4/2024 8:46:00 AM
Hello John, Your evocative words beautifully capture the essence of nostalgia, inviting me the reader to reflect on the passage of time and the bittersweet nature of reminiscence. As I read your poem, I couldn't help but feel a sense of wistfulness for moments past, illuminated by the soft glow of the candle's flame. Yes, cherish the memories that continue to flicker in the recesses of our minds, much like yesterday's flame. Enjoyable! - Daniel
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John Gondolf
Date: 3/6/2024 2:43:00 AM
Thanks so much for stopping by and sharing your thoughts, Daniel, I appreciate it. John
Date: 2/20/2024 7:12:00 PM
As moments begin to fade, memories seem to slowly slip away, but some still remain. Sad and tender, all at the same time. So wonderful knowing that: ' The flame still dances with the breeze, to bring back ancient memories that please . ' There's so many emotions within, and I'm holding each one so close to my heart. My best to you, my dear sweet friend. Hugs, Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2024 2:50:00 AM
Hopefully, the memories that slip away are only the bad ones and all the good ones remain. Thank you for sharing your thoughts Brandy, I appreciate you my dear friend. Hugs, John
Date: 2/20/2024 4:14:00 PM
your poem was enchanting and deep at the same time. I loved the nostalgic, reflective tone...at first I thought your poem was about a slender woman until I realized a woman wouldn't stand on the mantel (unless she was a Munchin or Hobbit). Loved this line: 'she still emits her gentle beams.' Faving this one. Have a great evening, Sara
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2024 2:40:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Sara, and thank you for saving it to your favorites. As we age our appearance changes and yet we are still the same person we always were. I’m glad you enjoyed it. John
Date: 2/20/2024 3:42:00 PM
This is deep and beautiful, John
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2024 2:38:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate it.
Date: 2/20/2024 7:47:00 AM
Beautiful imagery John, I can visualise the candle light flickering on the wall and reflecting on old memories Hope you're keeping well. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2024 2:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Tom, I appreciate it. All is well here, I’m enjoying the early Spring. John
Date: 2/20/2024 5:24:00 AM
WOW... I have a cavalcade of stirred thought chasing the lines of this poem as they flicker, candle-like, through time's dimming light. Beautifully written John
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John Gondolf
Date: 2/21/2024 2:34:00 AM
Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and comments, John, I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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