Michael J. Falotico Poet Couplet

Yesterday's Candle

Don't be ashamed of yesterday..
We took chances in times of disarray..

Built bridges that we can't cross alone..
Through narrow paths to lead us home..

Forks in the road that divided hearts true..
We went our ways and watched each other choose..

Tread lightly if your path is in the dark night..
Look up to the sky and remember I'm still your light..

Remember yesterday and the wisdom learned..
We shared a candle light but never got burned..

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 7, 2011 at 8:28 PM Hey Michael.. did your list of winners post yet? I cannot find them but noticed I received 9th place for "Charming Concerto" however my member points numbers did not change up one for some reason... wonder what happened luv? let me know OK?J.G. with luv..

January 17, 2011 at 9:02 PM Always a good thing, 'building bridges'.. Insightful and inspirational! Jack

Sharon Ruebel January 17, 2011 at 3:17 PM Oh Michael, Will I ever get through one of your lovely poems without tears? Your work is so beautiful and I relate to all of this. You have a true poets heart my dear friend Lov, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire January 17, 2011 at 12:36 PM This poems says so much to me, Michael. There was a man I loved and though our paths diverged, he is still a friend and source of light in my life. Definitely a favorite for me, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown January 17, 2011 at 11:34 AM I am stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments Michael. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A January 17, 2011 at 8:43 AM Sadly to say,, i'm not ashamed of doing and making the choices of yesterday.. however... forgiveness did take place first,.. enjoyed your poem Michael.. have a great day,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2011 at 7:36 AM Contest is filling up quickly.. am going to go over my entries later in the day and let u know my top five luv... W.K. of my life ... Jersey Girl on a cold Jersey day so gloomy but u are the bright spot luv...

Doris Culverhouse January 17, 2011 at 7:03 AM beautiful writing today....enjoyed!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 17, 2011 at 6:06 AM Ah yesterday and the wisdom learned.. powerful piece of poetry Michael and such a sweet remembrance ... perfect lines of your deep thoughts conveyed to a blank page which ignites with emotion.... well luv to your fair lady for those Jets.. I was on the edge of my seat the entire game... just to see Brady fold was wonderful...let's celebrate my friend.. Jeersey Girl in happy mode.. on to those Steelers... win win win.. with luv...always and forever..

Sara Kendrick January 17, 2011 at 5:42 AM Excellent work..Enjoyed reading this morn..We learn along the way for sure..Your presence at my work delighted me..Sara

Wilma Neels January 17, 2011 at 5:23 AM Omw, this has to go into my favorites and for so many reasons why.. This write is so relatable Mr. F!! love it :) Wilma

William Willis January 17, 2011 at 5:06 AM Hi Michael, Really enjoyed your verse here.Sometimes people in love enjoy there time together.Alas,they come to a crossroads in the relationship and decide that want different things.Well expressed my friend.Wm