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Yesterday's Acrostic

Yesterday is gone, All my longings My dreams crash and burn, Troubles are here to stay, Seemed that plight So hard to endure, Far from pragmatism Away I always stay! Now for sure It ideally Looks possible As time authenticates, Though anxiety still prevails, They're my yearnings Here I state To my very being Stay probable and achievable! Oh Great Lord! I need valiance, Believe in you In your approval, Yesterday is gone !!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/1/2014 10:58:00 PM
I like how you made the first and last line the same. That theme was also the one I was suggesting in my poem as well!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/3/2014 6:24:00 AM
Thanks Andrea !!
Date: 2/1/2014 2:32:00 PM
enjoyed the flow and expressive longing of this piece, upma... a finely composed acrostic!.. huggs
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 2/3/2014 6:23:00 AM
Thanks for the read n the like Nette!!

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