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Yesterday Who Is Went

I don't see yesterday who is went you said birds are rushed they were terrified but I don't see yesterday who is went friends told me the weather was cold the cats trembled made noise who is hear I don't see yesterday who is went the roads pointed red riding hood passed over your hat is it red I don't see but yesterday you went

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/21/2017 1:53:00 AM

I like this. It is unusual. The title needs reading a few times and that is good. I like the 'hear' in line twelve, intended or not. Congratulations on your win.

Rob Carmack

Date: 6/21/2017 1:01:00 AM

Semih - not sure if 'hear' in line 12 was a homophone error, or if it was in 'effect' of the 'noise' in line 11, so I assumed it was by design. Congrats & thanks for your entry.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/14/2017 5:47:00 AM

A very beautiful written poem, remember nobody knew that when someone s going to die, you don t even know about your fate, how can you blam that i didn t see it coming, only God knows what s going to happen but this poem was written beautifully, I really enjoyed it however i m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them