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Yesterday Who Is Went

I don't see
yesterday who is went

you said
birds are rushed
they were terrified

but I don't see
yesterday who is went

friends told me
the weather was cold
the cats trembled
made noise
who is hear

I don't see
yesterday who is went

the roads pointed
red riding hood
passed over

your hat
is it red

I don't see
but yesterday you went

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Kai Michael Neumann

June 21, 2017 at 1:53 AM

I like this. It is unusual. The title needs reading a few times and that is good. I like the 'hear' in line twelve, intended or not. Congratulations on your win.

Rob Carmack

June 21, 2017 at 1:01 AM

Semih - not sure if 'hear' in line 12 was a homophone error, or if it was in 'effect' of the 'noise' in line 11, so I assumed it was by design. Congrats & thanks for your entry.

Faraz Ajmal

June 14, 2017 at 5:47 AM

A very beautiful written poem, remember nobody knew that when someone s going to die, you don t even know about your fate, how can you blam that i didn t see it coming, only God knows what s going to happen but this poem was written beautifully, I really enjoyed it however i m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

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