Yesterday, Today and Tomorrow

Yesterday, big bites
Time flog the sweat to attempt
Killing lullaby

Today, chased the waves
Sprint lost towards to the sea
Swam and freely dove

Tomorrow, treasures
The time penned another page
Get ready to serve


11th place
Your own favorite haiku.
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dom Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 4:12 PM
Hi Yanny, congratulations!
Widjanarko Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 6:22 PM
Thank you Michael :)
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:44 PM
hello, Yanny. glad to see you today on this list. Congrats to you.
Widjanarko Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Andrea :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 1:14 AM
Hi congratulations Yanny luv, this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
Widjanarko Avatar
February 23, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Thank you Mandy :)
Lamoureux Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:27 PM
congrats Yanny
Widjanarko Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:42 PM
Thank you Rick :)
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:15 PM
Yanny,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA
Widjanarko Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:41 PM
Thank you Linda :)
Horsman Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 9:49 AM
these are so positive, just love them all three...
Lamoureux Avatar
December 24, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Loveley poem Yanny, sounds like a magical place.
Harrell Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 9:45 PM
It's great, Yanny. I like "The time penned another page". Tomorrow gets ready for us. Awesome. So love it.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 11:07 PM
Thanks Touquyen :D really glad to have a visit by you today :D-hug, yanny
Nickle Read Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 5:55 PM
So much depth, I love the way you've put this poem together. Great words. Read ;{>
Widjanarko Avatar
December 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM
Thanks David :D, great that you like it :D
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