Michael J. Falotico Poet Senryu

Yesterday and Tomorrow On Paper

Washing memories...
                                       A square fit in a circle...
                                         Just doesn't happen...

                                          Forgetting the past...
                                 Like running between raindrops...
                                          Always getting wet...
                                 
                                            Writing a future...
                                  Jumbled words scattered about...
                                         A rhyming life penned...

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Doreen Wright August 21, 2012 at 7:35 PM I absolutely love this!! The references and the flow make this a great one.

Dinda Minardi August 1, 2012 at 10:19 AM I love this one!!!

Jack Horne July 24, 2012 at 1:21 PM I love this clever write, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 24, 2012 at 10:05 AM and still more rhymes to come Michael luv.. this is a wonderful expression luv.. the second set I especially luv.. but rainbows are part of who I am too.. hope to catch up with u next week.. it has been a little crazy here.. hope u r enjoying Summer .. we r back at beach this week.. oh.. JG needs so much SUN.. xoxo..

Nette Onclaud July 24, 2012 at 8:51 AM lovely running commentary finely scribbled... you first line caught me at once, michael... greeat work!..:) huggs!

James Peranteau July 24, 2012 at 1:46 AM The Senryu is fantastic dear poet ! I was especially in rapture with the second Senryu here Michael; nailed this, dead on ! Have a wonderful week sir...much love, james

Russell Sivey July 22, 2012 at 12:11 PM This is quite the special write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity of this write, just like all of your poetry its very descriptive in nature! Fantastic poem Michael, Great Work!!