Yes Laura

be thou lonely in a crowd, my case too, till i allowed, strangers creeping into sight, begone foul demon such a fright, but i was such like dreaming, its orright:) Don

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/1/2011 5:59:00 PM

Awww! :) Awesome poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/1/2011 7:46:00 AM

I feel so honored to be able to read your poetry today Don. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/31/2011 9:35:00 PM

love this rhyme Don

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/31/2011 8:41:00 PM

Great Scots of Gibraltar, you have created a wonderfully awesome poem here Don! Yes I too sometimes feel lonely in a crowd, but I mustn't feel that way, it's really orright! Thanks for a comforting poem!! Outrageous work you've created!!