Yellowjackets

I piled my plate with ribs,
Potato salad and pulled pork,
Then grabbed a beer, a napkin
And my plastic knife and fork.

The picnic table beckoned
So we sat to have our meal,
Not knowing that our dinner
Would turn into an ordeal.

For out of nowhere there appeared
A yellowjacket pair,
Alighting on my plate, my food,
My beer, my hand, my hair.

Perhaps it was the honey
In the saucy-coated ribs
That attracted these invaders
Out to claim their rightful dibs.

I swatted and deflected them
But I could clearly see
That a peaceful, laid-back barbecue
This wasn't meant to bee!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Johnson Avatar
July 15, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Bzzzzz! :)
Mcleod Avatar
July 14, 2014 at 6:06 PM
Excellent poem Ilene. The 8th line might read better as "Would lead to an ordeal" for better rhythm. Just a thought. The rest I found witty and bounced around well. I love your work. Trevor
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July 12, 2014 at 1:38 PM
- I can see you ..... food and plastic knives and forks as weapons against the yellowjackets :)) - not the right place or the right day :) - I wish you better luck next time .... and a nice weekend, Ilene ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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