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Call me an old-fashioned fool, Call me an inquisitive fellow, But why is the sun now all white, When it always used to be yellow?

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Date: 2/18/2025 5:50:00 AM
White, yellow, who cares as long as Mr Sun keeps me warm :)
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Date: 2/18/2025 5:11:00 AM
A struggle to reconcile past perceptions with present realities.Nicely penned.4
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