Yellow Moon Sea

How startling the clarity,
the sky
Above Yellow Moon Sea
 
Deepest blue,
of a sky
Above Yellow Moon Sea
 
A moons' gentle caress
On a sea, so still
Perfect reflections
In me...
In you...
New directions
 
Somethings are always free
Love
Colour too
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
On the vastness inside of me
I looked for you
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
On the vastness inside of me
I looked for you
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
Gentle loving from me
I took you,
on Yellow Moon Sea
 
My heart, as liquid
Deep too
What you mean to me
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
I cannot wait
Yet, I cannot stay
What can be
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
I will miss you...
If you cannot stay
So completely
On Yellow Moon Sea
 
So, come with me
Such startling clarity
Such intensity
On Yellow Moon Sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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February 21, 2009 at 6:20 PM
Matthew, your poem makes me wish I could see the beautiful "Yellow Moon Sea." Such a vivid image! I see a harvest moon casting its glow on a dark sea. Thank you for sharing, "Such startling clarity, Such intensity on Yellow Moon Sea." Very creative and a bit haunting, too. Love, Carolyn
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November 19, 2008 at 12:44 PM
Fine assonance in your opening line... wonderful sentiment and most effective repetitions... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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