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Yellow Moon Sea

How startling the clarity, the sky Above Yellow Moon Sea Deepest blue, of a sky Above Yellow Moon Sea A moons' gentle caress On a sea, so still Perfect reflections In me... In you... New directions Somethings are always free Love Colour too On Yellow Moon Sea On the vastness inside of me I looked for you On Yellow Moon Sea On the vastness inside of me I looked for you On Yellow Moon Sea Gentle loving from me I took you, on Yellow Moon Sea My heart, as liquid Deep too What you mean to me On Yellow Moon Sea I cannot wait Yet, I cannot stay What can be On Yellow Moon Sea I will miss you... If you cannot stay So completely On Yellow Moon Sea So, come with me Such startling clarity Such intensity On Yellow Moon Sea

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Date: 2/21/2009 6:20:00 PM
Matthew, your poem makes me wish I could see the beautiful "Yellow Moon Sea." Such a vivid image! I see a harvest moon casting its glow on a dark sea. Thank you for sharing, "Such startling clarity, Such intensity on Yellow Moon Sea." Very creative and a bit haunting, too. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/19/2008 12:44:00 PM
Fine assonance in your opening line... wonderful sentiment and most effective repetitions... BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith
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