Notes About The Poem
I have several varieties of daffodils, jonquils, and narcissus..The other day the wind was whipping and the air was cold and totally cloudy..The hill of Daffodils reminded me of the sun..The stem on them is hollow which allows them to survive the cold fairly well but the blooms will get hurt or killed but usually the bulb survives for another year..Sara
Yellow Frill
I wanted to write a poem
About the Daffodil
But when I tried to fit it
In a form, it lost all its thrill
I wanted to say how lovely
Swaying upon the hill
Dancing in the morning breeze
Sporting her yellow frill
Daffodils fill my senses
Like a tulip in springtime
Like a star studded midnight
Like a fire on cold winter's eve
Their bright golden center
Like a golden sunrise
Daffodils in spring centre
Even when clouds fill skies
Daffodils light up my life
When my hope had gone
From winter's drear strife
Daffodil you help me go on
For your bright sunny
Center lights up my life
You are nature's bonny
Excellent flower of highlife
(Kind of borrow some from "Annie's Song" sung by John Denver...
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