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Yellow And Illuminating Brilliance

Out on porch to glimpse a sunrise Orange sun cast gray 'on clouds Whispy light airy sparse white clouds On horizon not like shroud Then as the sun inched up orange Disappeared replaced by Illuminating brilliance clear Against blue blue sky Dramatic change for human eyes I longed to stay awhile How many didn't even notice Beauty very worthwhile Iambic heptameter used as ballard stanza Used by Emily Dickinson in many of her works

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 7/18/2012 11:07:00 PM
What a great poetry form to utilize,Sara. No wonder Emily Dickinson has so many pretty poems. This one is too.
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:23:00 PM
Nice one. I love it.
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:44:00 PM
lovely write, Sara. I must check out some more Emily Dickinson poems - very interesting form
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Date: 7/16/2012 11:32:00 AM
interesting what's the definition of the form? Light & Love
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Date: 7/16/2012 10:49:00 AM
What a great display of wondrous colors and clouds in the air my friend! The beauty of a sunrise is beyond anything imaginable in my opinion, so many variable within its creation! There can be so many different colors splashing within its cast! What a wonderful poem Sara, I love it! Great Work!!
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:53:00 AM
a different hue of painted words from you, sara... very imaginative!..:) winning wishes and huggs!
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Date: 7/16/2012 8:54:00 AM
Vie, it sounds familiar, but can't place the rest of the poe. Sara, great poem for the contest. A beautiful sunset.
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