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Summer energizes us, tempting us with warmth, lovely gardens, the zeal of life. 

She turned to the sunlight And shook her yellow head, And whispered to her neighbor: “Winter is dead.” —A. A. Milne Y our old-fashioned lemony pie E specially with meringue L uxurious curd of citrusy yellow L ight hue that exudes energy O stentatious and tempting dessert W insome jaunty, yellowy, crusty delight

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Date: 5/27/2024 5:58:00 PM
Sounds delicious, comment one to me, please- LOL
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Date: 5/25/2024 11:30:00 PM
Aah Kim, you make my mouth water with this tangy tart. Is there anything more scrumptious and sumptuous as a lemon pie. Keep on baking baby sister.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2024 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Randy! :)
Date: 5/24/2024 11:25:00 PM
Dear Kim, Oh now you've made me hungry, but alas I have already had dessert. So next time I eat a lemon meringue pie, I'll think of your clever poem YELLOW. Carol Louise
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2024 7:10:00 AM
You are so SWEET! :)
Date: 5/23/2024 4:01:00 PM
I'm drooling! :-) A captivating acrostic...yes, yellow exudes energy...that's why hubby and I tend to plant flowers, etc., that are yellow. An engaging read. Enjoy your evening, hugs, Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 6:53:00 PM
Thank you! I don’t always let people drool on my tablet…lol.
Date: 5/23/2024 11:41:00 AM
oooh my hubbies favourite dessert! I will have to bake one one day! hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 6:52:00 PM
Yay! Glad I inspired you!
Date: 5/23/2024 10:37:00 AM
Hello Kim Rodrigues, Yellow brightens a dull day. Yellow is great in pie. also Jello. Yellow is the3 sunshine. in the sky. Brightens a dull day. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/23/2024 11:48:00 AM
Hello Kim, The went into the white clouds. olh well. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/23/2024 10:52:00 AM
Hope your day is as brilliant as the sun! Hugs, Darlene!

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