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Yellow

“The sun is a lion roaring, shaking his mane of golden light.” - by poet Dandelions roar: Yellow lions in the grass Mimicking the sun.

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Date: 4/21/2024 8:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Very creative. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Those dandelions can be a horrible weed for those who love a well-manicured lawn. I probably would encourage their blooms. Sara K
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 4/22/2024 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Sara, Yes, dandelions are best in the park. Sadly, it's too much work to keep them in a 'pet lawn' (ours is only semi-tame (digging out bindii, and yes, dandelions). Somehow they always sneak in, and I'm both pleased and annoyed. J :)
Date: 4/19/2024 1:09:00 PM
- A great haiku, Jeanette :) - (I love Haikus ) - Congratulations :) -Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 4/19/2024 7:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I prefer short poems too. One thought at a time. J :)
Date: 4/18/2024 9:31:00 PM
The sunny image is 'cat-cute,' methinks. Lovely, Jeanette.
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 4/18/2024 10:03:00 PM
Thanks. It's in the 'cat-itude' - They like to be in charge... J :)
Date: 4/17/2024 11:08:00 PM
exquisite reading, enjoyed your delicate haiku
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Jeanette Swan
Date: 4/18/2024 2:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed. J :)

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