Years

She says over glasses
low on her nose –
You think I don’t
love you? Heaven knows,
how you make me
want to swear.
Love is pre washing
your underwear.
Oh! How a man
can sweat and stink!
Dishes just pitched
in the bathroom sink,
Dirty clothes on the floor
and pick up, pick up, pick up!
It seems we’re always
people’s gossip.
And you think that I can’t see?
You hear every word I say.
And by the way, you think
you’re having your way.
I give and give
and you want more!
You just think
it’s what I’m for.
I bend and bow,
you push and shove.
Now that’s what
I call true love.
So many years,
for goodness sake.
You’d cause
any heart to ache!

He twinkles through glasses
high on his nose –
You make me swear
and heaven knows!
But that girl on her swing,
she's just as pretty now.
No, don’t give me that look,
I haven’t a clue as to how.
All those years without a word,
bouquets of flowers
and midnight
showers...
You think that I can’t see?
Your eyes get a glow
like a fawning doe.
And I know you know
what you’ve said, I heard.
It’s just that I can’t
remember a word.
You give and give
and yes, I take.
You bake,
I eat the cake.
I am a man after all.
You’re the cushiony pillow
and I, implacable wall.
I’ve been a good husband,
except for one eye.
I am after all a guy.
After so many years,
I look at you and ache.
You’d cause 
any heart to break!

He twinkles through glasses
high on his nose.
She smiles, you were
always the one for a pose.
Holding the photo,
her fingers trace
her memories,
his glossy face.
All those years. And you
never said you loved me.
But I know in your sleep,
you dream only me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 4/30/2015 7:58:00 PM
Mark, ONCE AGAIN Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:09:00 PM
So lovely and clever, Mark. I like the way you imaged both from the husband and wife's point of view. Being married nearly 57 years, I can somewhat relate! Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:03:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2015 10:12:00 PM
Mark, Congrats on your awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/24/2015 11:16:00 PM
It's okay if you hate the poem Mark, it was enjoyable... Good luck in the Knight Writers contest... LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2015 9:37:00 PM
Yes pre-washing... I like that thought.. Mark, sometimes I wonder why after so many years, love becomes a silent voice. I like the ending, we know at the end of every day.... Hugs LINDA
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Date: 4/23/2015 7:50:00 PM
This is absolutely wonderful, telling the tale from both sides the way you did. I love this.
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Date: 4/23/2015 4:53:00 PM
oh this is charming - love the humour and the reality like it is a real conversation - very clever write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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