Yapping

words can put you off the stroke, constant yapping they invoke, loss off concentration, chokes, romance just aint a rapping, dingoes dongers flappin... round the slippery slidin slopes... thank you Ruben O "from the prison" Don
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Williams Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 9:46 AM
Don thougthful words here mate..David
Sivey Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 2:54 AM
Quite the interesting write my friend! I love the line, "loss off concentration, choke" you can take that one of several ways...to die from concentration, or maybe perhaps to be taken aback by your loss of concentration! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read early this morning! Great Work!!
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April 2, 2012 at 5:54 PM
Very nice one, Don! :D Always, Laura
Rhinem Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 5:13 PM
Smile ~ Tis why i like to step back and breathe in the fresh air * Kool ~ Love, John!:) ~
Johnson Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 6:30 PM
all about concentration ...spose
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