Wyme 2

To gain acceptability
You let yourself in on crowd mentality
With all this capacity
And intrinsic ability
You consciously decide the mortality
Of your own capability
You deny individuality
And instead accept multiplicity
All in search of false glory
You toy with your own story
You decide to change God’s transcript
Only to create your own flawed script
Sooner or later we’ll all face death
Pretty soon you’ll take your last breath
At the thought of this truth, many fret
The end of life is set
You’ll eventually join the bus
And believe you me
Its taking you nowhere near Jos
The real question is if you’re ready
To meet with your maker all calm and steady
With your eartlhly deeds worth it
And surely his judgement non-cloudy
Not that your feelings matter much
Only God decides such
I only pray heaven’s gate you touch
And on heaven’s lawn you eventually stand
On a day when many will land
In the scorching heat of hell’s sands
Only to kiss the devil’s hands………..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/3/2012 12:09:00 PM
Great job. It reminds me of Job's life whose body was adorned with scores of sore without a knife cut. Akinbobola, this is a great piece.
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Date: 5/3/2012 12:27:00 AM
well written, could be more positive in the outlook :-) but hey, nice work
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Akinbobola Adeyemo
Date: 5/5/2012 8:43:00 AM
thanks,i'll take that to heart
Date: 5/1/2012 4:48:00 AM
More nice 'stuff' ;>D Terry
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Akinbobola Adeyemo
Date: 5/5/2012 8:44:00 AM
sure, wait for it!
Date: 4/22/2012 1:59:00 PM
it was nice stopping by to read your poem today...hope you enjoy it here at poetry soup..keep the good work up....
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Akinbobola Adeyemo
Date: 5/5/2012 8:43:00 AM
appreciated much,thanks a lot
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