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wrote it not in correct form wrote it again true to form For: Cyndi MacMillian's Contest Creativity---Write A Modern Haiku Honorable Mention

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Hassana Shuaibu

Date: 1/6/2012 5:10:00 AM

wow. congrats. obviously well deserved.

Adelaja Olayiwola

Date: 12/9/2011 10:07:00 AM

hi! Congratulations on your win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/9/2011 2:18:00 AM

Congrats Carol x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2011 11:38:00 PM

Another one I remember really liking. Congrats for the hm, sweet CArol.

Kash Poet

Date: 12/8/2011 11:26:00 PM

An interesting write here Carol.Congrats on your win.

Fabiyas M V

Date: 12/8/2011 8:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your honorable win in the contest,Carol!

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/8/2011 4:35:00 PM

Congrats on your HM, Carol! Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/8/2011 4:05:00 PM

Congrad's Carol..hope your holiday is going well! Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/8/2011 1:25:00 PM

I had to smile at this :) Witty haiku, Carol! Congrats!

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 12/8/2011 12:58:00 PM

Great Carol! Congrats. on you HM.

David Williams

Date: 12/8/2011 12:29:00 PM

Carol congrats on your win..David

Bl Devnath

Date: 12/8/2011 11:54:00 AM

Thank you for your wish. Congrats on your win. bl

Edward Mccormick

Date: 12/8/2011 11:54:00 AM

So eloquently stated Carol... I too use this process every time when crafting my lines... Bravo! ~ECMc

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/8/2011 11:10:00 AM

Thank you to all who have commented on my work. It is always appreciated. Love, Carol

Dalila Agtani

Date: 12/7/2011 12:26:00 AM

Hello Carol I have that experience in poetry specially the contests which require specific forms, i can relate to this Haiku Carol. When my brain get messed up then I go to free verses then I feel better. Nice read for me tonight. Good luck in the contest. Dalila

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/6/2011 4:14:00 PM

good luck in the contest! Light & Love