Wrote It

wrote it
not in correct form
wrote it again
true to form
For: Cyndi MacMillian's Contest Creativity---Write A Modern Haiku Honorable Mention
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Shuaibu Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 5:10 AM
wow. congrats. obviously well deserved.
Olayiwola Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:07 AM
hi! Congratulations on your win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 2:18 AM
Congrats Carol x
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:38 PM
Another one I remember really liking. Congrats for the hm, sweet CArol.
Poet Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:26 PM
An interesting write here Carol.Congrats on your win.
M V Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 8:41 PM
Congratulations on your honorable win in the contest,Carol!
Merryman Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:35 PM
Congrats on your HM, Carol! Kim
Guzzi Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:05 PM
Congrad's Carol..hope your holiday is going well! Light & Love
K. Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 1:25 PM
I had to smile at this :) Witty haiku, Carol! Congrats!
The Rogue Rhymer Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Great Carol! Congrats. on you HM.
Williams Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 12:29 PM
Carol congrats on your win..David
Mccormick Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:54 AM
So eloquently stated Carol... I too use this process every time when crafting my lines... Bravo! ~ECMc
Devnath  Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:54 AM
Thank you for your wish. Congrats on your win. bl
Brown Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Thank you to all who have commented on my work. It is always appreciated. Love, Carol
Agtani Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Hello Carol I have that experience in poetry specially the contests which require specific forms, i can relate to this Haiku Carol. When my brain get messed up then I go to free verses then I feel better. Nice read for me tonight. Good luck in the contest. Dalila
Guzzi Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 4:14 PM
good luck in the contest! Light & Love
Duncan Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Nice,, I wish you luck in contest ;} blessing,, thank you for commenting o mine !
Chafer Avatar
December 6, 2011 at 12:52 AM
Very nice haiku. Good luck in the contest!
Ball Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 12:20 PM
If at first you don't succeed, Try, Try Again. (or give up but then you won't gain anything) Nice job Carol. God Bless, JB
Eastman Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 7:44 AM
That's us poets for you. Great write and true.
Maverick Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 12:55 PM
I suppose thats what you call learning by rote Carol (ha ha) wish you well in the contest..! (and enjoyed the write)
Foster Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 9:51 PM
Creative is the word, well done Carol...cheers Margaret
Elliott Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 9:53 AM
beautiful write. truth in truth's truest form :)
Devnath  Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Fantastic, happens to me practically. Enjoyed the wonderful haiku. Thanks, my friend. bl
Johnson Avatar
December 1, 2011 at 3:32 PM
thank you for my treasured place, lovely haiku interlaced, thank you Carol my dear, i am gone was johnson here?
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