Wrong Destination

Unaided and jaded within a world I have created, isolated and left alone I see my light travelling has faded. I walked and ran to sit then stand and in my mind’s eye, I figured my plan should be grand and decided to fly. Lonesome in my shadow I free myself for my dignity, although I live down below I see my darkened solitary. Philosophical and redeeming I sense a tempting wonder, catastrophic, dull and streaming I condense my infinite ponder. A light travel in the distance can string along imagination, while my sight loses resistance, and brings a wrong destination. Couplet with internal rhyme Travel Light Contest Kai Michael Neumann January 15, 2017
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Martin Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 1:37 PM
Congrats Laura! :-)
Neumann Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 5:10 AM
Luloo, this is great. You writing poetry is the right destination. Many wishes, Kai
Burch Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations luloo!! Big Hugggs. Deb
White Avatar
February 2, 2017 at 6:48 AM
I loce it how you used light and dark here in so many clever ways. Congratulations
Gupta Avatar
January 16, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Deep and beautiful ...
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